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Introduction
Health literacy (HL) among the general public has become progressively more important for public health because many aspects of health care depend on understanding written information and verbal instruction (McCormack et al., 2010). HL includes addressing individual skill development as well as providing the delivery of actionable information that is easily understood in a manner appropriate to the audience (U.S. Department of Health Human Services and Office of Disease Prevention and Health Promotion, 2010). Many of the same populations at risk for limited HL also suffer from disparities in health outcomes (Berkman et al., 2011; Mantwill, Monestel-Umaña, & Schulz, 2015). Not surprisingly, both low HL and childhood obesity disproportionately affect rural and low-income populations (Paasche-Orlow, Parker, Gazmararian, Nielsen-Bohlman, & Rudd, 2005; Zahnd, Scaife, & Francis, 2009), with children from parents with low HL having greater obesity risk (Chari, Warsh, Ketterer, Hossain, & Sharif, 2014; Sanders, Federico, Klass, Abrams, & Dreyer, 2009). Thus, it is critical to determine the degree to which written materials clearly and effectively communicate health information when adapting evidence-based childhood obesity interventions for families in health disparate communities.
National initiatives have focused on incorporating health communication approaches to provide accessible information targeting individuals’ literacy and cultural preferences (National Institutes of Health, 2015; Plain Language Action and Information Network, 2010; U.S. Department of Health Human Services and Office of Disease Prevention and Health Promotion, 2010). The goal is to develop materials that attract and hold the readers’ attention, make them feel respected and understood, and motivate action (Centers for Medicare & Medicaid Services, 2010). Accordingly, a number of tools have been created to guide the development and evaluation of written materials for programs and interventions (Centers for Disease Control and Prevention, 2013; Centers for Medicare & Medicaid Services, 2010). However, despite being highly recommended (Brach et al., 2012; Koh et al., 2012), these tools are rarely used in the development of health promotion materials within a research setting.
The lack of use of health communication approaches may be one of the underlying reasons that HL emerges as a contributing factor of childhood obesity (Chari et al., 2014). Various family-based treatment interventions have been developed to address childhood obesity (Ash, Agaronov, Young, Aftosmes-Tobio, & Davison, 2017; Bleich et al., 2018) and, while all include written materials (White et al., 2013), there is limited evidence that those materials have been adapted and or developed using clear communication strategies. In addition, written materials used in efficacy studies with narrowly defined study populations may be less clear for audiences beyond the original study population (Brach et al., 2012), highlighting the potential low generalizability of written materials used in efficacy trials.
A potential strategy to deliver actionable audience-appropriate information is to engage individuals, familiar with the cultural and linguistic patterns of the intended audience, representing a broad range of expertise, skills, and interests in the development and evaluation of health materials. In this context, effectively engaging the targeted community and research organizations in community-based participatory research (CBPR) approach may lead to improved health communication and the use of culturally appropriate materials (Israel, Eng, Schulz, & Parker, 2013; Lytle, 2009). In addition, a CBPR approach allows team members that interact with patients/participants on a regular basis to provide feedback on communication styles that may be more or less effective within the target population. Finally, obtaining feedback from members of the target population is an essential component in the process to ensure participant-level relevance of the written materials (Centers for Medicare & Medicaid Services, 2010).
This article describes the development of a culturally relevant workbook for parents of overweight children that used clear communication strategies to address key learning objectives from Bright Bodies (Savoye et al., 2005), an efficacious childhood obesity treatment program. To assess clear communication using a community-academic partnership approach, we used an iterative and systematic mixed methods process in the development and assessment of the intervention materials. We hypothesized that an iterative process that included the engagement of program participants and community staff in the development, evaluation, and revision of a program workbook would result in materials that were consistent with local culture (e.g., ways of thinking, communicating, and behaving specific to a given location and/or population) and clear communication strategies.
Method
Setting and Intervention Description
The Dan River Region (DRR) is a predominantly rural, health disparate and federally designated medically underserved area (Virginia Department of Health, 2008, 2012b) located in south-central Virginia and north-central North Carolina. The region currently has some of the lowest HL and highest rates of childhood obesity in the country (County Health Rankings & Roadmaps, 2015; Virginia Department of Health, 2012a). The Dan River Partnership for a Healthy Community (DRPHC) was formed as a community-academic partnership using CBPR principles with a primary mission to address obesity in the region. Under the larger DRPHC umbrella, clinical and community partners serving children in the region formed the Partnering for Obesity Planning and Sustainability (POPS) community advisory board (CAB) to develop programming specifically to treat childhood obesity (Zoellner, Hill, Brock, et al., 2017). This advisory board, collaboratively selected the Bright Bodies intervention, an evidence and family-based childhood obesity treatment program tested in metropolitan areas in Connecticut (Savoye et al., 2005), and adapted the content and structure for local delivery in the form of the
Clear Communication Strategies
The foundation of clear communication strategies to help produce “low barrier” health information material includes plain language and a reader-centered approach (Centers for Medicare & Medicaid Services, 2010). Plain language simplifies information without sacrificing the content or compromising the meaning. This approach gives special attention to graphic design and issues of cultural appropriateness, thereby making materials appealing to readers at all literacy levels. A reader-centered approach strives to understand the intended audiences by taking the reader’s perspective in identifying possible barriers within the written material. Most clear communication guidelines are derived from the social marketing framework and seek to improve communication of health messages (U.S. Department of Health Human Services, 1992). This framework proposes tailoring messages to fulfill the interests of those who would benefit from a behavior change and those who want to promote the desired behavior (Maibach, Rothschild, & Novelli, 2002). Messages are implemented as a systematic, continuous process driven by decision-based research in which feedback is used to adjust the message to ensure that all efforts are integrated and consistently support the intervention’s goals and objectives (Glanz & Rimer, 1997).
Participatory Approach
We used a CBPR approach to engage community and research organizations to review, adapt, implement, and evaluate (Lytle, 2009) written materials used in the intervention. This participatory approach has been shown to reduce health disparities and enhance study relevance, validity, effectiveness, cultural sensitivity, and translation into practice (Choudhry et al., 2011; K. J. Coleman et al., 2005; Economos et al., 2007; Economos et al., 2013). The POPS-CAB was composed of academic researchers and community partners. The community and clinic partners are from the Pittsylvania/Danville Health District (PDHD), Children’s Healthcare Center (CHC), Danville Parks Recreation & Tourism, and Boys & Girls Club. Planning process and first-year experiences of the POPS-CAB were described elsewhere (Zoellner, Hill, You, et al., 2017). The CBPR approach also aligned with an important strategy to improve clear communication—the team approach (Centers for Medicare & Medicaid Services, 2010). The team approach included members from the community, engaged delivery staff, parents from the intended audience, and researchers.
Development and Evaluation Process of i Choose Workbooks
One objective of the POPS-CAB was to create materials that would be relevant to local families. Thus, we designed a mixed methods approach that would engage the POPS-CAB and end users of the workbook in a process to review and adapt materials. Accordingly, we developed a formative evaluation process of the

Development of workbook content using clear communication strategies.
The overall research design for the development and evaluation of the
Adaptation and development of the workbook
After the intervention selection process by the POPS-CAB members, community partners identified that the written materials from the selected intervention (Bright Bodies) needed adaptations to better fit their community profile, including more culturally relevant content and images as well as the need to address different levels of HL. As the Bright Bodies (Savoye et al., 2005) materials were under a copyright and could not be modified, we identified the core principles and intervention objectives from the literature and used them to develop a workbook to accompany the
Tools for workbook evaluation
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The CCI (Baur & Prue, 2014) was developed by the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention (CDC) to guide the development, implementation, and assessment of messages and written materials to make them easier for people to read, understand, and use. Items on the CCI aim to represent the most important characteristics to enhance clarity and aid people’s understanding of information. The CCI assesses materials in seven key areas divided into four parts: (a) Part A includes the main message and call to action, language, information design, and state of the science; (2) Part B evaluates the clarity of behavioral recommendations; (3) Part C focuses on the use of numbers and clarity of expressing numbers; while (4) Part D focuses on providing a clear description of associated risks of taking or not taking a certain action. Not all parts of the CCI are applicable to all written materials and depend on the presence or absence of information on behavioral goals, the use of numbers, or if risk factors are presented in the materials. The CCI consists of 20 items that produce a numerical score to objectively assess materials. The scores from each part were tallied to obtain an overall score (out of 100%), with a recommended standard of 90% or above to make materials easy to understand and use (Baur & Prue, 2014).
The
Training and procedures for workbook evaluation and refinement
POPS-CAB members (
Intended audience testing
The workbook versions were pilot tested in the first and second wave of families enrolled in the
During the intervention period,
Workbook revisions
Following the first CCI evaluation, the curriculum subcommittee went through FG transcripts, field notes, delivery staff qualitative feedback, and CCI open ended questions, selecting quotes that indicate proposed changes. The findings were then summarized as a “proposed revision list” for each workbook chapter and chapter section (i.e., content area). The curriculum subcommittee then made adaptations to the workbook based on the revision list. The final documents were presented and reviewed by the POPS-CAB using an iterative process. Feedback from the POPS-CAB was used to confirm, correct, or clarify the changes made to the workbook.
Analysis
The quantitative data from instruments and surveys were analyzed in SPSS version 21, and analyses included frequencies, means, standard deviations, paired
Results
Material Evaluation
Readability tests
Readability tests revealed an overall workbook mean reading level to be at fifth grade. Table 1 shows results for all five tests performed in which no statistically significant changes were observed between tests conducted on the before revisions and on the after revisions. Variability between the measures of years of education required to understand the text showed results ranging from below fourth grade for SMOG (3.8) which considered the complexity of words (polysyllabic count), and seventh grade for Coleman-Liau (6.8) that considered the length of words (character count). In the Flesch Reading Score, where scores indicate on a scale of 0 to 100 how easy to read the material is, the overall result by chapters found it to be easy (80) to fairly easy (78). In addition, variability was found between chapters in ease of reading ranging from standard (62) to easy (80-86).
Readability Tests Results Before and After Revisions.
CCI
The initial POPS-CAB CCI evaluation resulted in an overall score of 76% reflecting an inadequate clarity level (Table 2). Qualitative comments (e.g., need to address multiple main messages and include more ethnically diverse pictures) described in detail on Table 4 demonstrated the need for a revision. For the final product, the evaluation resulted in a significant improvement in overall rating with a score of 90% (
CCI “Within Subjects”
SAM
SAM results indicate that the cultural appropriateness of material remained rated as superior (µ = 2) before and after for overall results and when considered by research members (Table 3). However, community partner ratings for the Cultural Image and Examples went from adequate (µ = 1) to superior (µ = 2). Before the evaluation, most of the comments in the SAM’s comments section were related to improving pictures to “
Suitability Assessment of Materials Results Before and After Revisions.
Results from the FGs
FGs revealed that the workbook accomplished its objectives and was easy to understand. They also reported that the workbook helped them rethink their behaviors and influenced them to promote health changes. Furthermore, parents reported that the written materials supported the other intervention components and was used as a reference resource. Finally, FGs also revealed workbook’s areas that needed improvement in format (e.g., more visual cues and separation of sections) and content (e.g., screen time focused in all types of media not only on TV) were also highlighted (Table 4).
Sample of Perceptions That Leaded Workbook Changes and Adaptation.
Results from the fidelity checklist
Delivery staff feedback revealed areas for improvement related to comprehension (e.g., difficulty in understanding energy balance) and format (e.g., Use “rounded” number to facilitate calculations). Table 4 shows sample of selected quotes by chapter from the transcripts and from the delivery staff feedback that influence changes in the workbook’s first version and Figure 2 provides a sample of changes.

Sample of change in Chapter 1—Energy balance section based on qualitative feedback.
Results from the summative evaluation
Data gathered from the parent/caregiver summative evaluation presented no significant difference between waves. Results indicated that parents felt satisfied with the workbook (μ = 9.2/10,
Discussion
We have described an iterative and systematic formative evaluation using a CBPR approach to develop, evaluate, and improve a childhood obesity workbook for parents of overweight children that used clear communication strategies to address key learning objectives. Because written materials are often used as an important intervention component (White et al., 2013), the main objective of this study was to offer a process guide for the development and evaluation of written materials using a collaborative approach. The study adds to the current literature by providing a process to combine available HL tools (White et al., 2013), such as the CCI evaluation system, SAM, and readability statistics using a CBPR approach.
We documented that the intervention materials developed for this study were written at a fifth-grade reading level which was below the average grade level required for our participants (>ninth grade; County Health Rankings & Roadmaps, 2015). The SAM ratings improved following revision in our study, primarily due to changes in community partner assessments. This is consistent with research on written materials targeting parents to prevent childhood obesity (White et al., 2013) where the findings from the SAM measure identified specific areas related to cultural appropriateness that reduced the overall suitability of materials in their original form. White et al. (2013) also documented superior ratings after making specific revisions in response to SAM scores. Common revisions in response to these scores included rewording passive sentences, enhancing the color schemes, reframing of health information to better coincide with typical reading patterns, and adding in culturally appropriate visuals (White et al., 2013).
This is the first study, to our knowledge, that incorporated the CCI in the evaluation of childhood obesity treatment materials for parents. The CCI added evaluative factors for written materials beyond readability statistics and cultural appropriateness, and provided actionable information to improve the original workbook materials. Consistent with Baur and Prue (Baur & Prue, 2014), revisions based on the CCI resulted in written materials that were rated higher than original materials. These changes are hypothesized to increase the likelihood of parents, regardless of their educational level, to identify and understand the main message, and interpret numbers in each workbook section. Unfortunately, this hypothesis cannot be directly tested with the current study due to the multicomponent intervention (e.g., changes in comprehension could be due to adaptations made to in-person class or telephone support sessions rather than due to workbook changes)—though this would be an excellent area for future research.
Our study findings also highlight the importance of moving beyond readability statistics as a sole indicator of the appropriateness of written materials for a given audience. It is of note that the results of the readability assessments did not change when comparing to the original and revised materials—both were ~5th-grade reading level. In contrast, both the CCI and SAM assessments provided actionable information for revisions and demonstrated significant improvements in ratings between the original and revised materials. Despite the finding that approximately 34% of the parents in our sample had limited HL (Zoellner, Hill, Brock, et al., 2017) and that 18% of the adults in the region lack basic literacy skills (National Center for Education Statistics, 2003), readability assessments would have suggested that the original materials were appropriate. However, readability scores do not provide information on reading ease, prominence of main messages, behavioral strategies to initiate action, or cultural relevance—as the CCI and SAM provide—and can be misleading when determining the likelihood that the materials clearly and effectively communicate intervention information (Centers for Medicare & Medicaid Services, 2010). Therefore, the use of clear communication strategies has the potential to enhance program efficacy, perceived cultural relevance from community members, and satisfaction among participants.
The CBPR approach that actively engaged community partners in the workbook planning and adaptation process increased community capacity related to HL. Community members of the POPS-CAB played a critical role in the design and implementation of the written materials. Incorporating CAB feedback was important to develop clear and suitable materials for the regional childhood obesity treatment program. Their involvement in the interpretation and application of the evaluation findings also enhanced the quality of the materials while developed feelings of inclusion and ownership by community partners. The engagement of community partners in training on the CCI and SAM included the added value of increasing capacity in community members and may also lead and contribute to improved organizational HL and the quality of practice (Israel, Schulz, Parker, & Becker, 2001).
An interesting finding was the similarities between community and academic reviewers where the mean ratings were nearly identical while evaluating the communication strategies (CCI). However, the differences arouse in the evaluation of the cultural appropriateness where community reviewers indicated that they wanted to see more racial and ethnic representation in the images and examples despite highly rating the adequacy of the workbook. Based on that evaluation, the curriculum committee became aware and made sure to keep this aspect in mind while addressing participants’ requests (table 4) to add more pictures and food/recipes examples to the chapters. This example highlights how the CBPR approach influenced the changes to the content reflecting the community expertise of the local context. This input improved the cultural appropriateness of the materials, which otherwise could have been unnoticed by the researchers and readability tests.
Finally, to recognize and praise the significant time commitment of our community partners in the participatory evaluation process, our approach had an ongoing emphasis on optimizing the process, for example, by adapting to the resources available and determining the minimum data necessary for workbook development. At the same time, our community partners also indicated that they valued receiving specific details about detail the process, such as detailed reports by chapter of each indicator evaluated and perceptions that led to workbook changes and adaptation.
Our study included a number of limitations. First, we did not conduct a final round of FGs to assess the final version of the parent workbook. Although the use of the FG interviews in Phase 1 contributed to understanding of the problem from a reader-centered point of view, it was extremely labor and time intensive, including time needed to conduct the analysis collaboratively with community partners. Therefore, we decided not to conduct a second round of FGs after the final revisions because the materials showed a significant improvement and reached acceptable clear communication and suitability levels. Second, the sample size of CAB members that evaluated the documents before and after revisions was small. This is due to the nature of the study and our goal to report on the process of assessment and adaptation. Third, we developed the workbook and tested it within a multicomponent intervention, which does not allow for independent comparison of changes in the workbook with comprehension and study outcomes. Still, the findings provide a process for developing clear written materials for adults from an ethnically diverse, low income, and low literate community.
Conclusion
This article describes a CBPR approach to applying clear communication strategies in the development of childhood obesity intervention materials. The approach is driven by and tailored to community needs and involved contributions from individuals who would ultimately deliver the intervention and participants who have engaged with the intervention materials. We found that a process that included the engagement of community members and program participants in the development, evaluation, and revision of a program workbook to be both feasible to our CAB and staff and acceptable to potential participants who represented the target population. Our iterative process resulted in improved written materials that are written in an adequate grade reading level, clearly communicated the objectives of the program, and were culturally relevant while achieving a high satisfaction among users. The findings of this study suggest that, first, evaluative factors for written materials need to move beyond readability and include measures of the level of clarity of the messages and cultural appropriateness to provide actionable information to improve health information materials and that, second, an iterative process to intervention’s material development using clear communication strategies while involving community members, parents, and research partners may lead to workbook materials that are culturally relevant to the target audience, and better communicate program objectives.
